This is my interest essay I will be turning into the counselors! Would they accept me?

When someone says the word “art”, what do you think of? Do you think of a renaissance painter touching up his latest work? How about an opera singer, singing an aria? Maybe even an orchestra, finishing up their final piece? Well, when it comes to me, I think of Cosmetology. I am beyond words interested in the Herndon program for Cosmetology and would be forever grateful if I was to get in. Herndon provides a unique opportunity and I want to take advantage of the opportunity offered at Herndon to become a licensed Cosmetologist by the time I graduate high school and to also learn more about the profession. I believe it is a fantastic program. For as long as I can remember, I have always had an interest in doing hair, makeup, and even nails. I consider these things as ways to express yourself. I am more than 100% sure that I will be doing Cosmetology as my career in life. I have a passion for it, and regardless of the salary, I know I will be completely satisfied with my career, knowing that I will be happy as a Cosmetologist. I am willing to learn everything and more about Cosmetology to advance my career and to expand my horizons. I love to do all my friend’s hair and makeup, and I like giving manicures, because afterwards, when they look in the mirror and I see their thrilled expression, knowing that they are gratified with their appearance, not only do I know that they feel better about themselves, but I also feel better about myself too; knowing that I helped someone’s self esteem rise. I am also aware of specific qualities that are helpful when it comes to this career. I know that you have to be able to work in a face paced enviroment, have good advice, and to be friendly, courteous, and a people person. I believe that these qualities describe me well. My cousin runs a salon out in Raymore called Akeemi, and I go there sometimes and help her out, and overall, Cosmetology really does appeal to me, and with the Herndon Cosmetology program, I would love to get started on a future Cosmetology career right out of high school. Careers that I know of that are outside of Cosmetology but relate to that career are stylists, beauty consultants, beauty therapists, colorists, and more. If I was to have to get a second career, for example, I could easily get one that relates to Cosmetology, because I would have already had experience in that profession. I could even maybe further my career as a Cosmetologist, which would help my career goals, because I want to futher my future career as a Cosmetologist as much as possible. One of my long term goals is to become a hairstylist and a makeup artist for celebrities. Also, it would help future educational goals, because I would have learned more about Cosmetology.
What would be a good ending?